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SPACES

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Divine spaces
in stirring souls
Nebulae between stars
Fields between particles
Blackouts between dreams
Crackling, sparks between flames
Ascent and descent between notes
Stillness between breaths
I am somewhere between
tripping and rising
Unfathomable sigh 
~Inside spaces~
Sigh unfathomable
Rising and tripping
Between somewhere am I
Breaths between stillness
Notes between descent and ascent
Flames between sparks, crackling
Dreams between blackouts
Particles between fields
Stars between nebulae
Souls stirring in
spaces divine

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Author: DEBASIS NAYAK

A natural leader who experiments a lot and cares for all ! The title of my blog is not about my blood group. It's a message to all my readers to think positive and write on my blog posts openheartedly what they think!!

9 thoughts on “SPACES

  1. Bravo! Very difficult and perfectly executed with the effect of leaving the reader wandering across the mirrored spaces like Alice in Wonderland. I love it!

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  2. Thank you for your kind comment.

    Joanna

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  3. I like your poem, but not sure I understand it fully. I don’t have to understand it to like it. I think of and see space and stars. The fact that I write sci/fi could be a contributing factor.

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