Divine spaces
in stirring souls
Nebulae between stars
Fields between particles
Blackouts between dreams
Crackling, sparks between flames
Ascent and descent between notes
Stillness between breaths
I am somewhere between
tripping and rising
Unfathomable sigh
~Inside spaces~
Sigh unfathomable
Rising and tripping
Between somewhere am I
Breaths between stillness
Notes between descent and ascent
Flames between sparks, crackling
Dreams between blackouts
Particles between fields
Stars between nebulae
Souls stirring in
spaces divine
B +Ve!! 
Bravo! Very difficult and perfectly executed with the effect of leaving the reader wandering across the mirrored spaces like Alice in Wonderland. I love it!
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Thank you!
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Thank you so much!! 😊
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Beautiful Post!!
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Thank you
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Thanks Rachana! 😊
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Thank you for your kind comment.
Joanna
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I like your poem, but not sure I understand it fully. I don’t have to understand it to like it. I think of and see space and stars. The fact that I write sci/fi could be a contributing factor.
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Thank you.
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This is just so beautiful. I want to read it over and over to absorb it’s meaning. Truly beautiful.
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Thank you very much!
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